If you cared
Why did you leave
The door open
No locks
No alarm
Wind blowing in and out
Such a free spirit
Until you fell
Like a drowned angel
Sopping wet
The sparkles all gone
Only broken wings
And a bruised body
Heart shrunken
By the salty waters
Anything must be better
Than to be alone
6 comments:
Hey Chris What happened to your blog? it doesn't look cool anymore...
It used to be a solid black and now its gone
nice poem
Hey Chris! Love the new poems!
Your layout is really cool, I'm thinking of changing mine, too. I'm getting tired of it.
Welcome back!
woah cool
budding flowers
i like that :)
who r u and y r u tlaking 2 my friend's (silly via and bncowgill and ssmallfry)? gosh r u a stalker
i'm not telling u my e-mail adress. how do i not know that u r'nt some 45 yr old stalkerfreak who's gonna come find me? i'm going paranoid. please dont try 2 b friends with poor helpless 7th graders like me who you meet on line. other than that i like your poem.
The end is devastating but fantastic. It's haunting.
Haunting as writerwoman says. Good job, Chris!
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