One Deep Breath 12/17/07: A kind of beauty

Twilight and sunset
Light hitting the clouds just right
Forming illusions

Fantastic colors
Bended light approaching us
Waiting to be seen

8 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

I like the image of twilight as an active agent in this poem rather than a thing that happens. These are lovely.
Writing in Faith

Tumblewords: said...

These are both beautifully written. Love the bended light approach and the forming of illusions concept!

Jodi Barone said...

Light with color is intoxicating...you captured that for me.
jodi barone

Tiffany said...

I like the last lines of each, "forming illusions" and "waiting to be seen".

Greggo said...

very picturesque haiku! well done!

little wing writer said...

excellent...you have mirrored the sky and sunset so beautifully in your 'ku

spacedlaw said...

Clouds ! My favourite illusion!

qualcosa di bello said...

twilight is the perfect vehicle of beauty in your words.