I like the image of twilight as an active agent in this poem rather than a thing that happens. These are lovely.Writing in Faith
These are both beautifully written. Love the bended light approach and the forming of illusions concept!
Light with color is intoxicating...you captured that for me.jodi barone
I like the last lines of each, "forming illusions" and "waiting to be seen".
very picturesque haiku! well done!
excellent...you have mirrored the sky and sunset so beautifully in your 'ku
Clouds ! My favourite illusion!
twilight is the perfect vehicle of beauty in your words.
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I like the image of twilight as an active agent in this poem rather than a thing that happens. These are lovely.
Writing in Faith
These are both beautifully written. Love the bended light approach and the forming of illusions concept!
Light with color is intoxicating...you captured that for me.
jodi barone
I like the last lines of each, "forming illusions" and "waiting to be seen".
very picturesque haiku! well done!
excellent...you have mirrored the sky and sunset so beautifully in your 'ku
Clouds ! My favourite illusion!
twilight is the perfect vehicle of beauty in your words.
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