One Deep Breath 8-29-07

Tiny Pretty Things

Shared wedding bands shine
Symbolizing commitment
Never ending love

Minute microchips
Size thrown far out the window
With technology

Only a few cells
Multiply so rapidly
To form the baby

6 comments:

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Oh, Chris, these are a treat. I can't decide which I like the best.

Roswila said...

Ah hah, cells as tiny things. Very interesting response to the prompt. And, of course, a baby being pretty and tiny ...

Greggo said...

simply beautiful. i especially love the first one.

Tumblewords: said...

each one better than the one before - so nice!

jem said...

Good stuff. You've really worked hard to bring something new out of the prompt. I like the microchip one especially - its good to read haiku about things that dont immediately appear poetic.

Plain Foolish said...

The first one... thank you.