I really like the image in the first one of the unborn babies sitting side by side -- it gave me a wonderful visual. And how true that 2 children will be so different, even if they are twins. :)
Hi Chris, It's been awhile... These are lovely haiku, how they flow together so well. The first one especially caught my eye. I find it interesting how children have such distinct personalities, even from birth. --Robin
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That last Haiku works so well to highlight/explain the first two. they work so well together.
Very interesting haiku Chris. They are thought provoking.
Great choice of comparison, contrast. Nicely written!
The first one gave me quite a thoughtful pause ... :-)
I really like the image in the first one of the unborn babies sitting side by side -- it gave me a wonderful visual. And how true that 2 children will be so different, even if they are twins.
:)
It is amazing how siblings, and even twins, turn out so incredibly different. I enjoyed your haiku poems - thank you!
Hi Chris,
It's been awhile... These are lovely haiku, how they flow together so well. The first one especially caught my eye. I find it interesting how children have such distinct personalities, even from birth.
--Robin
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