3WW 9-19

Nine girl scouts slept sound
Ambiguous to the bear
Eating all the food

Hung up on the trees
But cookies was not enough
To fill the bears gut

Eight girl scouts woke up
To find the ninth playing fetch
With a huge grizzly

14 comments:

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

This is wicked Chris. I wonder if she tasted like chocolate mint?

Rose

xo

Charlotta-love said...

lol. I mean, ouch.

Jo said...

Guffaws galore.....just great!

m said...

Fun poem with unexpected ending.

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, no. They weren't prepared. Fun, oh, fun!

TC said...

Yikes!

Shephard said...

Just grizzly. ;)
~S

Ther said...

oh, i hate to think of what can happen. this is a fun poem. i liked it. =)

paisley said...

eight girl scouts woke up
to find the ninth,, entre di jour
for a huge grizzly!!!!!!!!!!!

gautami tripathy said...

What a great ending!

Bone said...

This reminds me of that beef jerky commercial, Fun with Sasquatch, or whatever it is.

Naquillity said...

Fetching use of the words. Loved the ending. Keep up the good work.

Michelle Johnson

Clare said...

Hi Chris! This is hysterical and brilliantly clever!! You had me laughing out loud!
:)

Gay said...

The use of the word "ambiguous" instead of "oblivious" adds a whole other layer of meaning.