3WW 8-29

In the old Hotel
Many obscure items rot
Lost and Forgotten

Blank face lingering
Down the corridor fading
Such a subtle haunt

Quietly Burning
The taxi had only crashed
Only seconds passed

8 comments:

Sweetest in the Gale said...

I'm glad you made up for lost time...I loved all three!

paisley said...

and all a joy to read... i think the haiku idea is great... i will have to give it more of a whirl one of these days.....

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

I especially like the face and the subtle haunt, Chris.

I've lost them, too, especially when I type them directly into a post rather into the computer first..

Herb Urban said...

Those were all great. I often wonder about lost and forgotten memories in old hotels. The stories they would tell if only the walls could talk.

Bone said...

Welcome back, Chris. I liked the second one especially. Very haunting.

gautami tripathy said...

The scond one gives a surrealistic effect.

I like all three.

TC said...

I have to say, the first one really did it for me, mostly because, after years of working in hotels, I know how true it is :)

Clare said...

Hi Chris! I like to do haiku for 3WW too -- there is something about Bone's 3 words that work nicely in that format. Your haiku are really great -- I especially like the last one.
:)