RANDOMIZER WORD: barrage
Butterfly Kisses
While blinking
Over and over
The barrage
Of images
Start
Then it happens
The tangle
Curse this day
When intimacy
More innocent
Than that of lips
Could become
A knot
Blood boils over
As eyes again open
And realize
Just a dream
In between blinks
6 comments:
Holy crap, I really like that! Nicely done !
Thanks Sandy, good to know you have not been scared away yet...maybe you won't be. This one was a bit of a stretch to finish but I like the results too.
Why would I be scared away???? I like what you write, so I'll keep coming back.....
I have five or six more finished, just want to take my time and post one per day. Things look nicer that way. :0) I'm glad you are enjoying the poetry.
Why would anyone be scared away?
You have so much passion, I know I always come back for your poetry :)
Joy, that was just for Sandy because we do some emailing-it was meant to be sarcastic. It makes me feel good that you are really enjoying reading here.
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