tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post4643922530594853031..comments2023-10-01T09:56:17.291-04:00Comments on A ClockWork-Chris: BuriedClockworkchrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-74491861684996711092007-01-12T09:27:00.000-05:002007-01-12T09:27:00.000-05:00Gosh that sounds grim - it reminds me of the vampi...Gosh that sounds grim - it reminds me of the vampires Buffy kept finding crawling up in the graveyard.Crafty Green Poethttp://craftygreenpoet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-74304010516108496082007-01-12T16:14:00.000-05:002007-01-12T16:14:00.000-05:00Some days are just like that! I've had morning...Some days are just like that! I've had mornings when I feel just as you've so aptly described...<br><br>Read some of your other posts, too - very interesting place you have here.Paulinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-14284893184087622552007-01-12T17:02:00.000-05:002007-01-12T17:02:00.000-05:00Great poem! I like the persistence throughout...Great poem! I like the persistence throughout...paris parfaithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-27580021273059445442007-01-12T17:15:00.000-05:002007-01-12T17:15:00.000-05:00CGP-ewwww-Buffy! JK-whatever you get from it is f...CGP-ewwww-Buffy! JK-whatever you get from it is fine. I hope the older movie and not the series.<br><br>Pauline-appreciate the comment and compliment about the site-It's only been up for less than two weeks so I hope I can keep it interesting.<br><br>Paris-I try to be persistant with everything I do, but with poetry I have a point and have to get it across by whatever words necessary to make it obvious to me. Thats when the fun comes and everyone gets something else out of it.Clockworkchrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-64093231204915351162007-01-13T23:52:00.000-05:002007-01-13T23:52:00.000-05:00I have been there! Great description using the cof...I have been there! Great description using the coffin analogy. It made the confinement seem real.writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11663999834116728908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-89325640964722394922007-01-14T03:20:00.000-05:002007-01-14T03:20:00.000-05:00Hi- The comparison to a coffin is a strong image a...Hi- The comparison to a coffin is a strong image and I can identify. Some days <i>are like that!</i><br>Yes, it often is a way "to dig out" by helping others since you're shifting the focus. <br>You sound very giving of yourself "Broken fingernails, bruised arms, legs, and chest"<br><br>BTW, if you're the one I read about on Poetry Thursday who had to take his wife to the ER, I sure hope she is doing better. Please tell her.<br><br>GeL of Emerald EyesGeL(green-eyed lady)http://shadowsinthemoonlight.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-7187380431490546612007-01-14T10:13:00.000-05:002007-01-14T10:13:00.000-05:00Sara, nice to see you back. I'm glad you enjo...Sara, nice to see you back. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Sometimes I do feel very confined much more so than just a bad day, but thats life. <br><br>Gel, I can tell you've had experience with bad days as well. My whole life before college was helping people. I volunteered at a phone line for children and teens with problems answering calls. I don't think about it much now becuase it's just my job and when I am off work I only have my wife and a few other people I talk to offline. <br>It was her in the ER and she is back to 100% now. Thanks for you're concern.Clockworkchrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-15654709366542651652007-01-16T06:18:00.000-05:002007-01-16T06:18:00.000-05:00This was powerful, great work here Chris!I've ...This was powerful, great work here Chris!<br><br>I've felt this way many times in the past - I know how hard it is. <br>And I completely agree with Gel:<br>"it often is a way "to dig out" by helping others since you're shifting the focus"Joyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08093211237788086448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4323886673365428771.post-61787600062214182682007-01-17T06:33:00.000-05:002007-01-17T06:33:00.000-05:00well said Joywell said JoyClockworkchrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.com